Hi Max, I really like your cool color and tracing. All your red and yellow that you put in reminds me alot about the sun. Next time you could make the cause a Because. Cool Max I really like it but did you find the tracing hard?
Kia ora I'm Connor from Yaldhurst. I enjoyed the part that you like stir fry.You brought me back when I saw you at preschool.Next time you could put your favorite game.When did you do this? From Connor
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Hi Max, I really like your cool color and tracing. All your red and yellow that you put in reminds me alot about the sun. Next time you could make the cause a Because. Cool Max I really like it but did you find the tracing hard?
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Deletedaer max imy name is max im from yaldhurst model school i like how ou explained your liking for fish .
ReplyDeleteKia ora I'm Connor from Yaldhurst. I enjoyed the part that you like stir fry.You brought me back when I saw you at preschool.Next time you could put your favorite game.When did you do this? From Connor
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