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Friday 24 August 2018

welcome my name is Max. in class we have been learning about our all about me.



Jurrasic park is one my favorate movies. I am nine years old and my nick name is muscle man. I am a year 5 at school and my favourite food is BK. My favourite subject is reading and I like trains. I love pugs, I am from New Zealand my favourite colour is cyan (blue mixed with green). I have 3 siblings. I am the youngest. but have younger cousins.


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5 comments:

  1. Miss Morgan27 August 2018 at 16:17

    Hey Max,
    What a great effort you have put in. I really like your writing as well as your picture! Great work!
    I like BK too! What is your favourite meal? I always get the BK chicken combo! YUM!
    Are you really strong? Is that why your nickname is muscle man?

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  2. Anonymous3 September 2018 at 10:26

    Hey Max
    Great work. I remember learning about this in cyber-smart with Miss Morgan. You could try adding sound or voice.

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    1. Anonymous4 September 2018 at 09:22

      hello thank you for the comment have you done this twice cause i have but i did not post my first one to the blog and anyway when i post to the blog i don't know how to put sounds or music in it.

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  3. Unknown9 September 2018 at 19:22

    Kia ora Max, the Jurassic Park movies are one of my favourites too. Did you know I could never watch them when I was younger because they scared me. Now I love them! Pugs are also one of my favourite dogs too! My only advice for you would be to give this post a title. Great job Max, keep up the awesome work!

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  4. Anonymous16 May 2019 at 14:18

    Kia ora Max, I love how you have added photos of the things you like in this post, and did you know I Like Pugs as one of my favourite dogs as well! Really, the only advice I would give you about this blogpost is: could you add a title?

    Kind regards, Eamon from Yaldhurst Model School.

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