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Friday, 16 August 2019

The Ice Cream Truck


hi this is my reading work its a shared slideshow that Me Tini Jorja Carlos Mark and Heavenly made if you want to see my slide go to slide 3 some pople though havent finished Now ENJOY

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Max, I'm Amelia from Yaldhurst Model School.

    I liked the way you showed what you didn for a story web and also what some other people did.

    The facts you have used are really good to describe the story. I like the one where you said what all the characters where in the story.

    To improve, you could always add a few more different fonts of text and colours for text. Also a catchy title and a decorated front page slide are good ways to get people to look at your blog.

    What story where you reading?

    Bye!

    -Amelia 😉

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